In my basement I see my childhood. I see people hugging me. They all love me and everyone is kind. We are laughing and we are having a really good time.
On the first floor I see people that like me I have lots of friends and people to talk to but most importantly a beautiful girl in the middle and I like her and she likes me now my life has meaning.
On the second floor I see all my family and friends all at the park with a gigantic pool in the middle and slides that are 50 feet tall. We are all eating ribs and having a big barbecue. Now we all sing a song together like we are one person.
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It totally makes me feel like im in the basement and makes me feel lik im right there in the action!:)GREAT JOB!
-Austin
I rally like this poem I could see what you are seeing I could actually feel the conversation that people are having with you
I also like your choicey vivid adjectives
by;JESSAYMN CROUCH
Austin, what do you see in the basement? What one detail? Jessaymn, what do you hear? What song are they singing? Which adjective, good?
Ms. Chaloux
I like it justin even though it dosent have alot of detail i can see your friends and family hugging you and loving you i like it alot justin good job
I loves it but maybe you can describe it a little better but it was cool
rolando barcenas
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